A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts.It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter * Describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team * Summarize the benefits of paying for the concerts * Say how you think the company should spend the money

Dear Sir, I am writing to you today to provide my feedback about the decision of your company to use the money for the benefit of our community. I would like to put forward some of the

benefits

of sponsoring the

children

's

sports

team

.

Sports

is

the

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one of the best ways for

children

to develop skills like

team

building, planning and handling difficult situations effectively. If your company sponsors the local

children

's

team

, it will

be motivate

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more and more

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children

to participate in

the

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sports

activities. It will truly help them for their overall development.

However

, there are few

benefits

of having

open air

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concerts

as well

such

as the local food vendors can put up the stall and earn some money. Local bands can participate and showcase their talents. It will help them to get some

promotion

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and bigger opportunities. In my perspective, your company should sponsor the local

children

's

sports

team

as it will drive more

children

towards

sports

. It may inspire

another companies

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also

to do the same. Having

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open air

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concerts

is a good idea but the community has already had five

concerts

in the past two years. So to sum it all up,

benefits

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of sponsoring the

children

's

sports

team

outweighs the

benefits

of paying for

open air

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concerts

.

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you for your time and consideration. Yours sincerely, Riddhi