Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes or violence increase. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Serious crimes need capital
punishment
so that the offender 
are
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will be
is
unable to get involved in the
crime
in the future.
However
, If they want to stop the acts of violation in the
future
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future, then
then
it would be better to forget him and judge him for a change
 .
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.
Overall, I agree with the fact that
punishment
is the
way
to avoid the 
crime
to be
increasedand
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increased and
hence
our lives become more secure. If the wrongdoer wants to be a good 
man
 and there is a particular financial or personal problem that led him to the wrong
way
,
then
it would be the nice option to forgive him and try to solve the problem he have.
Although
by
this
way
, some bad 
man
 may become
effective
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effectively
 part of the
society but
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society, but
some do not bring
themselves
objective case of they
them
to the right path because they are very much used to of it. The person that _ involved in the
crime
and never try to stop the law-breaking act should be punished in the extremely serious
way
.
However
, it totally depends on the nature of
crime
. Some 
crime
led to a capital
punishment
and some may require a small penalty. The law-making institutions are responsible to bring the bad
man
to the right level of
punishment
that he deserves. If there is weak legislation to properly handle the offender, it may become our society less secure for the good 
man
. The government should be the responsible authority to provide a secure and better state to live. Laws should be implemented and executed in the most proper
way
that do not allow the offender to commit violent acts or to break the law in any
way
and to any extent. To sum up, it is the responsibility of the state 
runnerto
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runner to
stop people to 
involved
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involve
in
crime
. It may be done through solving the problems of the people that led them to commit that 
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violence act
violent act
or by the
punishment
accordingly
.
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