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13. It is often said “When in Rome, do as Romans do” Do you think people should adapt and accept the culture of the country they visit? Do you think it is possible to learn a culture without learning the language?

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The common view is that people should embody the local
culture
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 when visiting a foreign
country
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.
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 I completely argue that the visitors should and practice the local values,
this
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 cannot be done without knowing the native
language
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To begin
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 with, when a person visits another
country
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, he/she will undoubtedly experience some interaction with the native people and their
culture
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. As cultures around the world are held in high regards the natives, any disregard on the visitor's behalf, intentional or
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, will inadvertently result in a hostile reaction from the natives. Muslim women in Australia have been a target of verbal, and in some instances, physical assaults by the locals because they wear conservative costumes rather than Australian dresses.
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 shows that by failing to practice the local
culture
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, visitors can encounter uncomfortable situations. Cultural understanding,
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, cannot be achieved without learning the local
language
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. Without
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 linguistic capability, a visitor's
chances
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chance
 of interaction with the locals are seriously reduced, which results in less exposure to the native
culture
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 will inadvertently decrease the capacity of a visitor to understand and practice the local values to a bare minimum.
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, if one desires to learn a foreign
culture
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, he better equip himself with the local
language
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. In conclusion, acceptance of a foreign
culture
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, in my opinion, is of great significance when visiting another
country
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 and that cultural values cannot be grasped if one does not know the local
language
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. It is hoped that people understand the importance of cultural harmony and linguistic understanding when visiting another
country
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