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You want to recommend someone to work in a company. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: Who the person is How did you know the person Working experience of the person. Why do you recommend the person?

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Respected Sir, I am writing
this
 letter in regards to referring to one of my
friend
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 for the position of Senior Software Engineer in our
company
. My friend, Nikhil, has worked with me in my previous
company
 on numerous assignments. His profile has a diversified portfolio of successful projects. He has a total of 7 years of extensive experience in Java technology and has a keen interest in all the modern programming languages. He is diligent and appreciated by the clients often. Not only technically, but his communication skills are
also
 par excellence. He called me
last
 week and
shown
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 interest in joining our
company
 as his work has become repetitive in the current organisation. He wants to get exposure to new technologies that will help
further
 in his career.
Also
, he wants to join a product based
company
, like ours. In my opinion, he will be a pivotal asset to the
company
. I would request you to please consider his candidature for the open position. Thanks, Kapil
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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