Some people believe that it is a good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely

In today's world, free flow of an information becomes an important aspect as an
accessability
the quality of being at hand when needed
accessibility
and a global
connect
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connects
are relatively easier. Specifically, in a scientific, academic and business domain, while
free flow
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the free flow
of a
data
the specified day of the month
date
are
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is
important, some believe
otherwise
. In
this
essay, I will
be discussing the both
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be discussing both the
view and giving my opinion. An academic and scientific learning
are
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is
mainly continuous
evolution
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evolutionary
process, which is based on a past
work
done by the different scholars. These details become a critical for the future findings.
For example
, free shared
work
available from the Newtown's
work
on gravity, Albert Einstein's
throry
a well-substantiated explanation of some aspect of the natural world; an organized system of accepted knowledge that applies in a variety of circumstances to explain a specific set of phenomena
theory
of relativity and similar instances are
become
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becoming
a seminal
work
for future research
work
. Having said that, availability of all
this
shared free information become a base for furthering their
work
and achieving a great good for humanity.
In addition
,
entire industrial revolution
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the entire industrial revolution
in
20th century
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the 20th century
are based on availability of shared
work
freely available for the various
industry
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industries
and vividly important mechanical instruments are
been
the state or fact of existing
being
innovated during that period.
However
, in
contempory world
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the contemporary world
contemporary world
, scientific research required a plethora of financial resources and protected by intellectual property rights (IPR) and freely sharing IPRs are not viable from the business perspective.
For example
, a large corporate can not share it's market detail because it will
negetively
in a harmful manner
negatively
impact the future
prospecte
the possibility of future success
prospect
prospects
and give
advantage
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an advantage
to
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
competitors.
Also
, for business to share information freely and openly, It's like squandering all efforts done by company to achieve financial goals. In conclusion, I firmly believe that in
current world scenario
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the current world scenario
, all data can not available freely to share and we need to access each subject and need to see on a case to case basis for
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
requirement and a financial viability in an open market.
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