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it is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents , for instance, for sports or music and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Geniuses are naturally endowed individuals who are gifted with talents.
However
, some people say that people
withouth
in absence of
without
 these gifts can be trained to be the best at whatsoever they desire. In my opinion, I believe humans can learn to be excellent at whatever they please.
This
 essay will analyse both schools of thought. On the one hand, there are some special children born with inherent skills
at
Suggestion
in
 particular activities
such
 as singing or engaging in sporting events.
This
 is because they undertake these tasks with little or no effort.
Additionally
, some of them have never been under anyone's tutelage to acquire knowledge about these things and,
thus
, perform excellently well while
doint
engage in
doing
 it.
For instance
, Salawa Abeni -a Nigerian musician- started her music career at the age of five. According to her, she has never attended a music
shool
an educational institution
school
.
Nevertheless
, she became a celebrity a tender age and still remain relevant today -fifty years later- in the entertainment industry.
Hence
,
in-born
present at birth but not necessarily hereditary; acquired during fetal development
inborn
 understanding of things is real and ought to be celebrated,
On the other hand
, wisdom can be impacted into a child and they will perform beyond expectation. It is only possible if the person is willing and open to learn.
Moreover
, giving up should never be in the dictionary of
such
 a man because quitters never win.
For example
, there are several doctors who have attained the peak of their career,
althought
even though, in spite of the fact that
although
 they failed a few times back in
school but
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school, but
 they were determined to never give up on their dreams.
This
therefore
 was the propelling force which helped them reach great heights. In conclusion, even though people with congenital abilities are usually the best among their peers, geniuses can
also
 be made but it requires doggedness and self motivation.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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