Human activities have a negative effect on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discussed the views and give your opinion.

There has long been controversy about environmental issues and people have a multitude of views about whether we should take measures to ameliorate the condition of the Earth or it is too late to take action at
this
stage. In my opinion, having a myriad of extinct animals and plants as yet, I believe conserving the
environment
is of paramount importance, not only to human, but
also
to any species on Earth. On the one hand, some people think that the animals and plants which go to extinction, cannot be returned and,
therefore
, any suggested solutions are still useless. Most of the people only concern about themselves, they do not pay attention to any species as long as beef, pork and chicken that they usually consume are still available for them.
On the other hand
, others think that it is never too late to start protecting the
environment
by taking effective measures. It is known that animals are our friends and human is a part of animals undoubtedly.
As a result
, if animals are experiencing extinction, so as human do in the coming future.
In other words
, saving the Earth tantamount to saving ourselves. In my opinion, having
living
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lived
with animals and plants on the same planet, we have
responsibility
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a responsibility
to keep
this
place in a satisfactory state of living which is clean. On an individual level, we can do some simple but helpful things,
for instance
, taking our own rubbish when we go hiking or beach, turn off
air-conditioner
Suggestion
the air-conditioner
when no one is using etc. More vitally, educators should start building up
students' mind
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the students' mind
at
young age
Suggestion
a young age
to allow them to understand the situation of
environment
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the environment
and ways to preserve it. Under
this
line of thinking, despite the fact that we cannot bring extinct animals back, the situation that the
environment
is having now
can not
can not
cannot
be ignored and people should take measures in daily life in order to bring positive effect on plant and animal species.
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