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Q- It is inevitable that as Technology advances, traditional culture will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Identity of native people across the globe is mainly due to
culture
Suggestion
the culture
 they
follow but
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follow, but
 these days, with
advancement
Suggestion
the advancement
 in
technology
 individuals are forgetting their
culture
 and somewhere it is losing
also
.
This
 essay will discuss and elucidate about the certain issue which is prevailing in the society. To embark with, change is inevitable because of developing
technology
, which directly influences the local tradition of the nation. People are more inclined towards relaxation, they do not want to do hard work and
this
 is the reason that why
technology
 is growing at
this
 fast pace. For an instance, making food by using conventional methods was a part of our
culture but
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culture, but
 after the introduction of various advanced machines, procedure of making food has completely transformed.
In addition
 to
this
, future generations do not even know the tradition of the region where they live in because they did not get the exposure of the
culture
 as they spend most of the time living in
digital world
Suggestion
a digital world
the digital world
. While these two things can go hand in
hand but
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hand, but
 it can only be possible with perfect planning of things. For an example,
history
Suggestion
the history
 of the nation can be depicted to the natives by establishing the museum, which can aid in understanding one's heritage and
culture
.
Moreover
, who can organise special campaigns for making
young ones
Suggestion
the young ones
 aware of their customs;
also
 parents can play a key role for the children as they spend more time with them. In conclusion, local
culture
 should be preserved by taking certain measures along with
evolution
Suggestion
the evolution
that is
 coming with the growing
technology
, as it provides identity to an individual that who they are and from where they belong to.
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