Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is true that group

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is one of the best ways for students to get their knowledge. While I tend towards the view that collaboration in studying is effective, I agree with the opinion that self-studying is

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better for pupils. On the one hand, it is undeniable that by studying together, students can easily understand their lessons through their classmates after class times.

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is because they do not have any pressures to ask their unclear ideas to other students and tell them to give a hand in order to explain them.

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, there are many pupils in the class that have different perspectives,

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, when studying in a group, learners can absorb the knowledge in various ways.

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, my friends and I always gather around someone’s house or sit in the coffee shop to

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and to make teachers’ lessons more clearly when final exams come.

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, learning independently can allow students to acquire more knowledge which is very different between collaboration as they can

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immediately in anytime and anywhere they like. Students can

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do not need to wait someone read the homework before doing them because it wastes their

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time

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, the more student studies alone, the higher chances for he or she to find a way to learn and motivate him/herself to create a new thing. In conclusion, I believe that both self-

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and

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in groups have their

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groups have their

pros and cons depending on the students choose with some reasons that I mentioned above.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

257 words

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Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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