Taking care of children is probably one of the most important jobs of society and parents should be forced to take training courses showing them how to do so. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Training programs for prospective parents should be made mandatory as raising a
child
is perhaps the single most important role of
society. Personally, I disagree with Suggestion
in
this
statement and the following paragraphs shall outline my reasoning for this
belief.
Firstly
, nobody should ever be forced to do anything against their will. This
is the mark of a truly free society which we should all strive to be. However
, support
for future parents should certainly be made available and offered to them regularly as this
is a most difficult
and onerous task, especially for those without significant family Suggestion
more difficult
support
. A great example of this
approach in action is the UK’s National Health Service who assess
each new Suggestion
assesses
parents
needs and send Suggestion
parent
parents'
support
workers to individual parents when deemed appropriate.
Secondly
, there is no single way to nurture a child
through their early years and childhood. The parents are in the best position to judge which way is going to be best for their child
as they know their child
best. Forcing people to attend a course that teaches one particular style may affect a parent’s judgment negatively and therefore
do more harm than good. For example
, one child
may need to be shown strong discipline from their parents as they are a very loud dominant
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loud, dominant
personality whereas
another may need constant encouragement as they are much more introverted personality.
To sum up, freedom and individuality are key reasons why parents should not be required to attend parenting classes. Governments around the world should do what they can to Accept comma addition
personality, whereas
support
parents but
not force them to do anything against their will.Accept comma addition
parents, but
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite