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Some people claim that not enough of waste from homes is recycled. They say that only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal recourse requirement To to what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their products.

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Domestic
waste
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 constitutes a major portion of
garbage
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 generated and is still not believe to be treated in an effective manner.
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, many advocates that
only method
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the only method
 to enhance reliability of litter is to legalise its recycling
.
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.
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However I
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However, I
 believe that along with
law there
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the law, there
the law there
 are other ways to promote reusability of
garbage
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 as discussed in
ensuing paragraphs
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the ensuing paragraphs
.
To begin
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 with legalizing recycling is necessary as it will provide more people to follow the rules under threat of law. Any government guidelines stating mandatory penalising for non adherence to recycling guidelines welcome compel people to put more emphasis on getting the
waste
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 generated by them to
recycling
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recycle
 bin.
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,
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,
if our household is fined
note
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not
 taking
garbage
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 to
waste
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 processing plants they will certainly become more aware towards the generated litter.
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, people will produce less
waste
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 Auroville personal responsibility for getting it recycled and thereby
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jade
 come
garbage
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 free.
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 programs promoting recycling can
also
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 help to curb
waste
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.
Idhar
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Either
 government alone or with
help
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the help
 of other organisations should design programs to encourage people towards a clean society. Sweden
,
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,
for instance
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, is a country where government has taken an initiative under which every resident get some credit point for every trash of can or bottle they put for recycling
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.
This
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 makes people to enjoy recycling as it brings them personal benefits.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
,
such
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 Initiatives can
also
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 be formulated to promote reusability. In Conclusion, legalization will compel more people to participate in
recycling process
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the recycling process
.
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However encouraging
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However, encouraging
 people to take
personal interest
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a personal interest
 in it can bring success in getting rid of
garbage
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 problems and will help creation of
better world
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a better world
.
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