You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The
graph
shows the tourism information office enquires received in 2011 from January to June, comparing the enquires done “in person”, “by letter/email” and “by telephone”. The
graph
has a scale from 0 to 2,000 and register how many
enquires
an instance of questioning
enquiries
they had in each month divided by type. Observing the
graph
, we can see that enquires “in person” raised considerably during the six-month period. On January 400 enquires were registered and on June, up to 2,000 enquires were done in person, representing a 500% increase.
Enquires
Suggestion
Enquiries
by telephone
also
raised approximately 160% from January (1,000) to June (1,600), but
on the other hand
, enquires by telephone decreased 50%, as we can see that 800 enquires were done
on
Suggestion
in
January and just 400
on
Suggestion
in
June.
Analyzing
Suggestion
Analysing
the
graph
, we can
also
note that the total amount of enquires increased quickly, approx. 2,000 enquires were done
on
Suggestion
in
January against 4,000 enquires done
on
Suggestion
in
June and that on February the three enquire types had a very similar demand, approx. 600 “in person”, 700 “by letter/e-mail” and 800 “by telephone”, and from March onwards they started to increase or decrease as reported above.
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