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Wealth does not necessarily guaranty happiness. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

#wealth #guaranty #happiness
The question of what makes a person happy is always debatable. Some argue that money buys
happiness
 and other argue it does not. I
also
 believe that money does not provide
happiness
.
Firstly
, I believe that money is a materialistic gain and it does not
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cause to have, in the abstract sense or physical sense
give
happiness
 to people. Materialistic can make people have a feeling of achievement for
short span
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a short span
 of
time but
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time, but
 its longevity
is
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has been
 always a question. There have been many
example
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examples
 where people have realized the gain of
physical property
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the physical property
physical properties
 as vein and started charity
instead
.
For instance
: Bill Gates
one
 of the richest persons for several years took the path of social service
one
 he realized that his capital only would not be sufficient for his
happiness
.
Moreover
, wealth is a root cause of many
health
 problems in
world
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the world
. When a person is wealthy, there is a high chance that
one
 lives a lavish
life
 which result
to
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in
health
 hazards.
For example
: a report by
World
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the World Health Association
Health
 Association shows that the chance of high cholesterol, sugar and blood pressure is directly proportional to people living a lavish
life
 which the rich people are prone to. To conclude, even though wealth provides ephemeral
happiness
 to people, the
happiness
 it provides is not eternal.
Furthermore
, wealth has the bleak side in our personal
life
 and
health
 too. If
one
 wants to be happy for a longer span of
tome
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the time
the tome
, learn to be live away from
health
 and adopt spiritual
life
.
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