The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.
The bar chart illustrates information about the
amount
of people who visited three main airports in new york city in a period of six Change the quantifier
number
years
from 1995 to 2000.
First of all.The number
of passenger
has increased Change to a plural noun
passengers
by
the Change preposition
over
years
.In 1995, LaGuardia airport
has the largest number
of visitors nearly 35 million
.While
Newark
airport
has the lowest amount
of travellers with slightly over than
10 Change preposition
apply
millions
.In 1997, John F. Kennedy Change to singular
million
airport
has just less than 50 millions
passenger followed by LaGuardia Change to singular
million
airport
slightly ahead Newark
Change preposition
of Newark
airport
with approimately
4 Correct your spelling
approximately
millions
travellers.The Change to singular
million
number
of LaGuardia airport
passengers. In 2000, was the highest nubmer
during the whole six Correct your spelling
number
years
almost 70 million
.Both of
John F. Kennedy Change preposition
apply
airport
and Newark
airport
had a similar amount
of visitor
in 2000, around 40 Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
million
more or less.
In conclusion. According to
the chart, Newark
airport
had the lowest number
of visitors during the years
even though the amount
has improved from almost 20 million
in 1995 to over than
40 Change preposition
apply
million
in 2000.Submitted by asd43214321asd on
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