The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.

The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.
The bar chart illustrates information about the
amount
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of people who visited three main airports in new york city in a period of six
years
from 1995 to 2000. First of all.The
number
of
passenger
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passengers
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has increased
by
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over
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the
years
.In 1995, LaGuardia
airport
has the largest
number
of visitors nearly 35
million
.
While
Newark
airport
has the lowest
amount
of travellers with slightly over
than
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10
millions
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million
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.In 1997, John F. Kennedy
airport
has just less than 50
millions
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million
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passenger followed by LaGuardia
airport
slightly ahead
Newark
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of Newark
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airport
with
approimately
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approximately
4
millions
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million
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travellers.The
number
of LaGuardia
airport
passengers. In 2000, was the highest
nubmer
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number
during the whole six
years
almost 70
million
.Both
of
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John F. Kennedy
airport
and
Newark
airport
had a similar
amount
of
visitor
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visitors
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in 2000, around 40
million
more or less. In conclusion.
According to
the chart,
Newark
airport
had the lowest
number
of visitors during the
years
even though the
amount
has improved from almost 20
million
in 1995 to over
than
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40
million
in 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, years, number, airport, million, newark with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant increase
  • highest number
  • steady increase
  • largest growth
  • dramatic
  • slowest growth
  • slight decrease
  • gradual increase
  • period
  • travelers
  • major airports
  • followed by
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