In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that is good for country, while other believe that government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
In some parts of the world, salaries of employees are very high. Some people consider it is a positive sign. While, another set of people believe that
government
should impose cap
on salaries and limit employee’s earnings. In my opinion, I believe there should not be limited Suggestion
a cap
for
earnings, people get paid as per their skills set and talent, directly or indirectly it Suggestion
to
motive
individuals to work hard and serve society.
On the one hand, individuals who are highly talented with unique skills are very rare. So they must be rewarded with high salaries to motivate them to do more. They can contribute much more to their employer as well as to the country. Suggestion
motivated
motivate
motivates
motivating
For instance
, they generate new ideas and implement those with their unique skills and passion a attract more projects. By this
they create more jobs and groom people for working on new advance project. Such
as, in tech industry Artificial intelligence experts are very rare but
are the major contributors to the society and to their employers, by generating employment and projects with their ideas.
Accept comma addition
rare, but
On the other hand
, some people think it is better for government
to control salaries and limit employees
earnings. Suggestion
employee's
employees'
employee
This
in turns government
budgets will get increased. This
amount can be used for the development of the country and raising people standard
of living. Suggestion
the person's standard
person's standard
peoples' standard
For example
, Government
Suggestion
the Government
spend
Suggestion
spends
this
public money equally among all. Such
as, providing everyone basic healthcare, education and housing facilities.
To conclude, I believe there should not be any cap for salaries, this
will eventually discourage people to work more and contribute to the society. But at the same time imposing limits on citizen’s earning will give a huge budget for government
to serve nation
. But, unfortunately every Suggestion
the nation
a nation
government
is not honest with their people.Submitted by saimahesh on
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