Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Museums is a good source of awareness of
history
and many foreigners want to
visit
museums when they went
for
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to
travel in another country. Nowadays, everyone
have
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has
to pay for
visit
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a visit
the visit
some museums and I think it gives a bad impact on society because the citizens of a country have a right to know the
history
at free of cost so there should not be any entrance
fee
for museums. To embark, I believe that the disadvantages of the
charge
for admission
in
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to
museums outweigh the disadvantages because there can be a detrimental
effects
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effect
by
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of
from
this
,
for example
, people are discouraged to
visit
museums and not be able to access fruitful knowledge of
history
,
furthermore
, poor people
can not
can not
cannot
afford
such
amounts,
therefore
, they do not go to the museums because they can not be able to pay an entry
fee
. From
museum perspective
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the museum perspective
, there will be
reduction
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a reduction
in the number of customers so it can be a high possibility of close the
museum
. I noticed that young people or students prefer to go for a historical movie
instead
museum
because they think they will have to pay for both of them and
noone
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no one
gives them an information of
history
freely, that's why they consider
watch
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watching
a movie which is based on historical events as a good source of entertainment and better choice than
visit
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a visit
visits
to the
museum
. On
flip side
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the flip side
of the coin, there are
also
some advantages of
charge
an entry
fee
.
Firstly
and
main reason
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the main reason
is that
museum
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the museum
need
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needs
money for maintenance, run their business, electricity and water bill etc.
Secondly
, it requires money to update their exhibits and to improve the place effectively for
attract
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attracting
people or visitors by
keep
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keeping
the place clean and good looking,
moreover
, I learnt that those museums which sell tickets are far better than those that do not
charge
an entrance
fee
in terms of their place, information and maintenance. To sum up, entrance
chargge
to make a rush at or sudden attack upon, as in battle
charge
charges
cage
should not be applied in the museums because of its merits
such
as, for
attract
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attracting
the student and the locals towards museums and free of
charge
should be considered.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Admission fee
  • Revenue stream
  • Maintenance
  • Overcrowding
  • Commercialization
  • Cultural heritage
  • Diverse attendance
  • Community ownership
  • Access to culture
  • Visitor experience
  • Exhibit quality
  • Cultural mission
  • Reliance on funding
  • Government subsidies
  • Cultural accessibility
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