Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Celebrities around the world has a lot of fans and

followers which

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followers, which

supports them in all their projects

such

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as movies, endorsements, and to some extend - even political views.

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, as the saying goes, “you cannot please everybody”, celebrities

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also has

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also have

are also having

their haters, bashed and paparazzi.

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The paparazzi

can be a fan or a

basher

a viewer who looks around casually without seeking anything in particular

browser

base

bother

that has one thing in common, they breach the privacy of a celebrity - they went overboard. There is always good and bad in being famous and influential. Some people believe that once you enter the world of show business or even politics, you are opening

you

of you or yourself

your

yourself

entire life to the public. Being a public figure, you are expected to be transparent - you are not

suppose

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supposed

to hide anything. Pictures of you will be taken without permission any time of the day whenever they spotted you.

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Tease

paparazzi will follow you everywhere you go in order to have a glimpse of your day. They will take photographs and videos

then

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upload it in social media channels. The photographs and videos may either be an advantage

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your career, an example is when you

where

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

were

seen doing

act

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acts

of kindness.

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, it can be a scandal that can ruin your name and reputation. Paparazzi knows no limits as they think that celebrities owe their increasing prominence to them.

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, there are still some who

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

hat

the emotion of intense dislike; a feeling of dislike so strong that it demands action

hate

everyone needs a private space away from all the cameras and enjoy being a

commenter

an expert who observes and comments on something

commentator

commander

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it is difficult for celebrities to have a normal

life but

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life, but

they

also

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wished to have

a lone

without any others being included or involved

alone

time for themselves. Their job is to give entertainment in front of the camera and it should end there. Like an employee, their work should

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end off-camera. In summary, paparazzi should know that celebrities are recognised because of their outstanding performances and they are being respected for a job well done. The price they receive is fame and

respect

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respect, however

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, the latter has always been forgotten.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

invasion of privacy
personal space
media scrutiny
mental health
public figures
relentless pursuit
legal implications
ethical considerations
tabloid journalism
financial gain
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