A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans,while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs,including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
many
people consider that humans should not take advantage of animals and even animals should be given Suggestion
Many
same rights
as humans. Whereas, other people debate that humans ought to use animals for their many needsSuggestion
the same rights
,
including for Accept space
,
food
and doing research.In my opinion, I believe that humans must use animals for fulfilment of their needs.
Humans are obligated to depend on animals for many requirements in daily life as there are limited resources on earth.For instance
, agricultural products can not suffice the demand of food
for whole population
on Suggestion
the whole population
earth so
humans are ought to depend on animals for their supplies. In a recent study it is estimated that more than 60 percent of people depend on animals for their Accept comma addition
earth, so
food
, almost everyday
.Even in research Suggestion
every day
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fields
failed
,
scientists need to test their newly developed drugs and vaccines before they can introduce it to the world.Accept space
,
For
example consider
monoclonal Accept comma addition
example, consider
antibodies
technique in which antigen is injected into an animal and the antibodies produced in its body are collected and used to treat the diseases in humans.
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antibody
On the other hand
,
if humans give up being Accept space
,
dependant
on animals for their needs and animal Suggestion
dependent
depend
also
are given equal rights,
Accept space
,
then
it will be highly impossible for humans to survive as they depend on animals especially for food
and experiments.Neverthless
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Nevertheless
,
animals should not be misused like in public shows like Accept space
,
circus
and other shows which are exhibited merely for entertainment and earning money.Suggestion
the circus
For example
,
Kangaroo Boxing in many countries is very well entertained.And Accept space
,
also
animals should not be locked in cages in zoos for longer period
of timeSuggestion
a longer period
longer periods
,
so that they can have their free time as even they have emotions and feel the pain.
In conclusion, I opine to say that humans must use animals for their many Accept space
,
needs especially
for Accept comma addition
needs, especially
food
,
research and experiments.Accept space
,
Inspite
of Suggestion
In spite
this
misuse of animals like in zoos,
shows should be discouraged.Accept space
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