You have just finished a trip booked from a travel agency, but you are not satisfied with it Write a letter to the travel agent in your letter, you should say: - why you felt so unhappy - what happened - make some recommendations about what the travel agent should do about it.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding a trip organized by your travel agency. The first reason for my unhappiness is the condition of the rooms. The rooms were in disrepair, cleanliness was lacking and no facilities at all. The rooms were far below our expectations. Upon booking the trip, one of your staff members told us that it would include all the essential amenities

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as food and recreational activities but when we arrived it was completely the opposite, we paid extra for these facilities.

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, we faced problems in check-in

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. As they were saying that they do not have any booking registered with my name

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we had to call your travel agency for assurance. I would like to suggest some measures so that no one faces the same issues that we faced. You need to be responsible and attentive towards customers.

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, make some policies or rules to ensure that customers receive the best service. Best regards, Raha

sidhukomal096Thu Feb 13 2025

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Task Achievement

Include more specific examples to illustrate your points, such as examples of the condition of the rooms or specific amenities that were lacking.

Coherence and Cohesion

Try to connect your ideas fluidly; for instance, you could provide a smoother transition between describing the issues and suggesting recommendations.

Task Achievement

The letter has a clear purpose and addresses the issue effectively.

Coherence and Cohesion

The closing is polite and fitting for a complaint letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

168 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Write an essay that summarizes and evaluates the key points of both texts. Use your own words to the extent

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