News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. There are two factors that influence their decisions. The

first

is the kind of customers they tend

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. Because each kind of readers and watchers has its own features.

For example

, if your customers are almost teenagers, you have to concentrate on something attracting them

such

as stories, photographs about singer stars, film stars, funny tales, and young fashion. It will be very silly if you try to provide teenagers with economic, politic news.

On the contrary

besiness

a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it

business

men and politicians may never read news about James Blunt or Keira Knightley.

Therefore

, what influence news editors’ decisions the most is the taste of their customers. The

second

the hot

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hotter

the hotness

the hottest

, the attraction of news. Who will reads or

watchs

look attentively

watches

watch

your news if it was one year, one month ago even

last

week? The answer is

nobody absolutely

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nobody, absolutely

. In the energetic and competitive world nowadays, people always ask for really new news. So that to satisfy customers, there is a pressure on all editors to find continually what has already happened not only yesterday but even an hour ago. Or else, they will lose their customers. None of editors

wants

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want

that bad future. On television or in

newspaper

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the newspaper

newspapers

a newspaper

, we seem to become used to bad news. It is a

little of difficult

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little difficult

for us to meet a piece of good news. We can’t deny that bad things occur on the earth day by day.

However

, news editors try to gain more and more customer, which means more and more money, by bad news. Because bad news makes us curious. We want to know why it is bad, what it is about, whether it influences us or not.

As a result

, we will buy newspapers or watch television to find out. And the happiest people are, of course, news editors. I think it would be better if more good news was reported. Bad news makes us worry and

sad

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sadness

. Whereas good news makes us happy. How much bad news is, there should be the same amount of good news. So, we can give something bad a lot of thought while still be joyful with good news. Any inequalities between good news and bad news should be avoided.

That is

the best solution. Now, we can’t live without news. Thereby, the role of news editors is very important. We should support them. And what they have to do is try their best to provide us useful news, both good and bad.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Demographics
Engagement
Relevance
Urgency
Natural disasters
Political upheavals
Public health concerns
Advertising revenue
Sponsorship deals
Market competition
Editorial policies
Censorship
Newsworthy
Desensitization
Bad news fatigue
Negativity bias
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