Task 2: Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions. Do you agree or disagree?

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Technological advances have paved the way for the development of digital

library

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resources.A large number of people argue that it is a waste of money to maintain traditional libraries since the development of advanced technology has enormous benefits. Personally, I don’t agree with

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idea. Nobody can deny that the digital

library

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resources help people a lot in broadening their horizon, for

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reason, it has a wide range of materials that books refer.

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, many kinds of books

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have an ebook version for people to easily use it via the internet.

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, it would save unnecessary expenses on

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

to the conventional

library

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, apart from the enormous benefits, the virtual

library

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brings, traditional libraries still plays a vitally important part in our lives.

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, digital

library

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and

conventional share

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a conventional share

some common features, the traditional one

has fulfilled

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have fulfilled

its outstanding functions

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as hosting reading events.

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, people consider

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place as the location for self-study and working conference, where there

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absolute silence, peace, and scholarly atmosphere that nowhere can replace.

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, it is said that, in the traditional

library

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, a variety of some rare books, archives or special manuscripts are not likely to be available in digital format with a wide range of precious information are placed there, which would never be seen anywhere else via the internet. In conclusion, it seems to me that

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the development of technology has paved the way for an online

library

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, the traditional one, which is a good choice for studying, has played an important role in daily life.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

261 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

repositories of books
promoting literacy
community engagement
equal access to information
digital divide
accessibility issues
personalized assistance
educational programs
cultural events
safe spaces
community meetings
tactile experience
preserving historical documents
important cultural repositories
fostering a sense of community
communal hubs
serene and focused environment
conducive to study and reflection
irreplaceable value
distracted environment

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Task 2: Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions. Do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

In a public-funded health care system people who are willing to pay for the best and fastest treatment should be able to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early.

Some people believe that entertainment such as film star pop musicians or sports star are paid to much money Do you agree or disagree? Which other type of jobs should be highly paid.?