Many people try to look youger than their age. What are the reasons people do this. Do you think this is a good thing or a bad thing ?

In the
last
decade body modifications in the form of injections and surgery
is gaining
Suggestion
are gaining
popularity. As more and more people are undergoing these changes there is a growing debate whether or not
this
should happen and why do people try to look young.
Although
aging happens to us all, in some areas
incereased
made greater in size or amount or degree
increased
age may mark the end of our career.
This
is especially true in the entertainment field where most of the lead parts are given to young beautiful actors in their 20's and 30's. It is easy to
understand than
Accept comma addition
understand, then
understand then
, why local
proceedures
a particular course of action intended to achieve a result
procedures
procedure
and other surgeries
such
as face lifts,
botox
Suggestion
Botox
injections and
rhinoplasty
to eliminate
Suggestion
eliminate
age related changes are so common among
entartainers
a person who tries to please or amuse
entertainers
. Other reasons may
also
acount
a record or narrative description of past events
account
accounts
for why we want to stay young at any cost. Getting old is associated with being
dependend
relying on or requiring a person or thing for support, supply, or what is needed
dependent
dependant
depending
on other people.
Furthermore
, it is associated with
illnessess
impairment of normal physiological function affecting part or all of an organism
illnesses
illness
and mortality. These feelings are frightening to many people and it is only natural to try and fight them. As a consequence we tend to hold on to things that makes us feel
youger
used of the younger of two persons of the same name especially used to distinguish a son from his father
younger
.
examples
Suggestion
Examples
to
Suggestion
of
that include doing a new
tatoo
a drumbeat or bugle call that signals the military to return to their quarters
tattoo
tat
or attempting an
extreem
of the greatest possible degree or extent or intensity
extreme
sport for the
first
time. It makes us look and feel young again. Despite the
natual
in accordance with nature; relating to or concerning nature
natural
mutual
concerns about loosing our youth, I believe getting older is a beautiful event and we should not be scared about it or try to hide it. Every period in life, both being young and being old, has its positive and
negetive
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
effetcs
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
. Elderly people are more calculated and have
better prespective
Suggestion
a better perspective
better perspective
better prospective
in life, characters that should be respected and looked
uppon
in contact with, on top of
upon
weapon
open
rather than fighting it. External changes associated with getting old is an amazing and
natural process
Suggestion
a natural process
and we should learn to admire it rather that trying to prevent it. Being old is as
bautiful
delighting the senses or exciting intellectual or emotional admiration
beautiful
bountiful
pitiful
as being young. In conclusion,
attemting
make an effort or attempt
attempting
to look
youger
used of the younger of two persons of the same name especially used to distinguish a son from his father
younger
than our true age is an understandable urge. Despite that we should realize that getting older is a natural part of our life. We should not be scared of it or try to prevent it because it is as amazing as being
youg
(used of living things especially persons) in an early period of life or development or growth
young
you
.
Submitted by chilafp on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: