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Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?

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Discussion regarding the topic "Usage of
vaccine
 to
cure
 of childhood diseases" is always a
debate
Suggestion
debatable
 one. To my knowledge, usage of these, is either for prevention or
cure
 the
disease
. Let’s discuss some of the advantages in the following.
Firstly
, For the former Prevention, vaccination should be given must in order to avoid them for the rest of
life
.
For example
, Polio which should
vaccine
 at the early stage of
life
, which may lead to death or leave the child physically challenged. If they become physically challenged,
then
 they need to suffer for the rest of their
life
.
Vaccine
 for
this
 sort of
disease
, is for betterment of
entire
Suggestion
the entire life
an entire life
life
.
For
Suggestion
To
 the latter point, immunize the children in order not get it once more in a lifetime.
For Example
, Chicken pox is the one which will show up at the early stage of childhood, may be under five years. Vaccination for these should be must as a
cure
. It’s not considered as
deadly
Suggestion
dead
, Nowadays, but when we consider the past lot of lives are lost because of it. Considering the other side of the coin, continues usage of
vaccine
Suggestion
the vaccine
vaccines
 may hamper the development of natural immune system. Some of the kids are dependent on medicine as
natural immune system
Suggestion
a natural immune system
 was damaged because of
medicine
Suggestion
the medicine
. They should depend on the
vaccine
through out
all the way through
throughout
 their
life
 and sometimes it may lead to
situation
Suggestion
a situation
the situation
situations
, where usage of them will not
cure
 the
disease
. In conclusion, Usage of immune for the
disease
 is good for
life
, if it was not a habitat
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