A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you that your museum team is looking for some candidates to do part-time or unpaid voluntary work
which is near to my house and I would like to apply for voluntary work
. I am a college student and I am on my summer break and available full time
. My professor Add a hyphen
full-time
gaveme
a project on voluntary Correct your spelling
gave me
work
and asked for full experience during unpaid work
.
Furthermore
, I'm perfect for this
work
because I have speaking skills, I can manage the visitor's sheet properly because I'm good at maths and I have a certificate in computer courses so if is there anything which is related to computer-based I'll give my best in it.
Also
, performing voluntary work
gives inner satisfaction. I have done so much work
without any fee and I'll feel so grateful if I can get a chance to work
for the museum.
I hope you take this
request into consideration and I'm looking forward to working with your team.
Yours faithfully,
SamSubmitted by shubhdeepkaur2 on
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task achievement
To improve task achievement, ensure that you fully understand and address all parts of the task given. While you mentioned your desire to volunteer and your skills, elaborating more on how these skills directly relate to the potential tasks at the museum would strengthen your response. Consider adding examples or experiences to demonstrate your skills in action.
coherence cohesion
For coherence and cohesion, work on logically organizing your paragraphs and ideas. Your letter flows relatively well, but sharper transitions between paragraphs and a clearer structure showing introduction, body, and conclusion will enhance readability. Using linking words effectively can also help in making your letter more coherent.
coherence cohesion
In terms of logical structure and ensuring a single idea per paragraph, make sure each paragraph serves a clear purpose and sticks to one main idea. For instance, one paragraph can focus on your reasons for wanting to volunteer, another on your specific skills and how they apply, and a final one on your availability.
coherence cohesion
Incorporating a more formal greeting and signing off can improve the professional tone of your letter. Consider researching standard formats for formal letters to ensure you're adhering to expected norms.
