Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame.

Although
some people feel that photographers ought not to run after celebrities as an invasion of their secret life, others share the opinion that
this
is a due
for
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to
being famous. I am of the opinion that taking consensual pictures of celebrities helps create awareness about their works. According to some people, celebrities’ private lives deserve to be respected and as
such
,
paparazzi
should not invade their
privacy
by taking pictures of them everywhere as
this
may result in numerous emotional challenges and downturn in career. To elucidate, people generally love to keep some
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
or characters perceived by society as morally degrading to themselves, and when
this
by chance
find
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finds
its way into the media, serious backlash follows. Celebrities are not different from other people and deserves to be accorded with
same rights
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the same rights
. A
notably
worthy of notice
notable
example is a popular musician caught on camera misbehaving for being drunk at a club.
This
resulted in emotional depression to the musician and
consequently
, his career and fan base declined.
However
, others believe there is a reward for everything in
life be
Accept comma addition
life, be
it good or bad, and as
such
, invasion of
privacy
by way of photographers running after celebrities is just one of the prices that comes with being famous. To illustrate
further
, many of the so called celebrated stars chase after bloggers and media houses earlier in their career to have their works propagated to the world and
this
has actually helped many to be successful and reach their current height in the society. In the same vein, upcoming bloggers and
paparazzi
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the paparazzi
are bound to base their headlines on contents relating to celebrated stars as
this
will help them achieve a wide target audience. Linda Ikeji, a popular blogger in Nigeria, became famous and rich for creating
contents
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content
about celebrities. In my opinion, I believe consensual taking of
celebrities’
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celebrity
pictures will help create awareness about their works, make them famous and rich, while at the same time not compromise their
privacy
.
In other words
, celebrities only need give
paparazzi
permission to
contents
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the contents
they are willing to share
to
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with
the general public. In conclusion, there are varieties of opinions on whether it is necessary for
paparazzi
to invade celebrities’
privacy
by running after them for pictures. I believe
consensual picture taking
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the consensual picture taking
of celebrated stars will help propagate their works and
also
not compromise their private life.
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  • invasion of privacy
  • personal space
  • media scrutiny
  • mental health
  • public figures
  • relentless pursuit
  • legal implications
  • ethical considerations
  • tabloid journalism
  • financial gain
  • public interest
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