Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Nowadays, Increase of
population creating
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population, creating
lots of issues in almost all the countries. Growth in density of people effects in many areas of that
contry
a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
like provision of basic needs
to
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of
their people. Even my country is facing the same issue's, which
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am going to discuss below. Major concern for any nation, nowadays is their count of people living in that country. Its
reposible
of the united state to provide food, shelter, medical aid for their citizens, which made it difficult to provide for their voters. Its not only
effect
have an effect upon
affect
the growth of
it but
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it, but
also
increase the crime rate to poor standards of living. In present
situation according
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situation, according
to
analysis
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an analysis
of UNO, illegal activities are more in poor nations rather than the developed one. The main reason behind it is, due to lower income rate of an individual living there. Not only that increase in
people
a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution
pupil
count
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counts
decrease the living
standards but
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standards, but
also
chances
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the chances
of increase in crime rate. Its
also
impact on the environment, by creating huge waste
from
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of
the people living over there. Considering the above points, some of the solutions are,
government
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the government
should educate their human resources regarding the consequences of having too many kids.
For example
, if
any income
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any, income
of a person is 3000 with a family of four members
then
he will spend around 750 per person. For the same income if he has four kids along with his wife,
then
he can spend around 600 per head. So, he may not be
fulfill
completed to perfection
fulfilled
all their needs, which may impact their basic
neccessities
the condition of being essential or indispensable
necessities
like education and medical provision. In conclusion, Its not
only responsibilty
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the only responsibility
only responsibility
only responsibilities
of the people's representatives to create an awareness in their public, but
also
all the educated people should
also
take an
intiative
readiness to embark on bold new ventures
initiative
for it.
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  • Sustainability
  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
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