Some people say that schools do not do enough to teach young people about health. Do you agree or disagree.

The importance of health education in the prevention of illnesses

such

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as diabetes, obesity and cardiovascular diseases in crucial. Despite that, I believe

scools

an educational institution

schools

souls

do not spend enough

resorces

available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed

resources

to teach our children about the importance of a healthy way of living. Unfortunately, even today children are still not fully aware about the strong association between inactivity and imbalanced diet and physical illnesses. The most striking example is the very high incidence of obesity among teenagers in the United States, caused by high sugar and caloric intake. Another important

exaple

an item of information that is typical of a class or group

example

is the high incidence of smoking and

alcholc

a liquor or brew containing alcohol as the active agent

alcohol

cconsumption

the process of taking food into the body through the mouth (as by eating)

consumption

among young

adults which

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adults, which

can have grave

consequenced

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

consequences

consequence

in the form of lung disease and

cacer

any malignant growth or tumor caused by abnormal and uncontrolled cell division; it may spread to other parts of the body through the lymphatic system or the blood stream

cancer

. These examples, in my opinion, can be reversed with the implementation of a profound change in the health education.

Much

Suggestion

Many

more

resorces

available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed

resources

should be put on teaching our students how to live a healthy life. Formal education

classess

a collection of things sharing a common attribute

classes

class

should teach about caloric intake, reduction of saturated fats and carbohydrates and how to build a well balanced meal.

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, physical

excercise

the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

exercise

classes and

it

it is

it's

association with physical and mental health should be stressed.

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,

school

Suggestion

the school

schools

shuld

expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something

should

change drastically the food which is given to our children so we can set an example as to what should we consume. In conclusion, teaching our children what to eat and how to live is an

imprtant

of great significance or value

important

role as out parents and educators. By showing them the right way to

live we

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live, we

will assist them later in life.