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Some people believe that the museums and historic sites should be open for free for children under 18. Do you agree or disagree.

#people #museums #sites #children
It is
arguable
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argued
 by many that historic
sits
assign a location to
sites
sights
 and museums should not charge an
entree
an item inserted in a written record
entry
 fee
to
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for
 children under the age of 18 years. In contrary, others believe that all people should pay a ticket in order to enter these important locations. In
this
 short communication I will attempt to explain why, in my opinion, these sites should be free for underage visitors. Visiting an important location
from
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for
 our
nations
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nation's
 past or seeing an
objects
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object
 of great importance
enreach
make better or improve in quality
enrich
 us both
intelectually
in an intellectual manner
intellectually
 and spiritually.
Intelectually
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Intellectually
, by visiting a
museum we
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museum, we
 broaden our knowledge and learn new facts and events from our history. Spiritually, by using different senses like touch, smell and vision we
enreach
make better or improve in quality
enrich
enriched
 our imagination and dreams. As an example, by visiting the old city of
Jerusalem we can
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Jerusalem, we can
 learn about the ancient Jewish culture.
Furthermore
,
this
 knowledge is combined with the smells, visions and texture of the old city
thus
further
 expanding our experience. As previously mentioned, I believe museums and historic sites
sould
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
 be free to children and adolescents, since I think it will lead to increased visitations in these locations. Allowing children to enter for free will allow many families who couldn't
efford
be able to spare or give up
afford
 it until now to come. As a
consexuence more
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consequence, more
consequence more
 and more children will be able to gain
knowldege
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
 and culture. In conclusion,
mueseums
a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value
museums
 and historic sites are
imprtant
of great significance or value
important
 to us all as they teach
as
The objective case of we, the persons speaking
us
 about our
sociaty
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
 and culture. By allowing our children to gain free access to
it we
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it, we
 maintain our knowledge and
histoory
the aggregate of past events
history
.
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