Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the worlds fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Transportation by
air
is known to be the fastest means of conveying
large number
Suggestion
a large number
of people and items across the seas and to very far destinations. It is a debated issue as whether to restrict
air
travel
due to serious pollution which it causes. But
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
disagree
to
Suggestion
with
the idea of restricting
air
travel
as
this
will cause some problem and
also
solve some problems too.
Air
travel
has helped to make the world a global village.
For instance
, people
travel
to various places within a space of time to visit friends and loved ones.
However if
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However, if
this
means of
traveling gets
Suggestion
travelling, getting
travelling gets
travelling getting
traveling getting
restricted, people will find it difficult to explore the world.
Furthermore
, other means of transportation
such
as cars and
ships etc
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ships, etc.
ships etc.
are
also
known to cause
air
pollution and makes use of the
worlds
Suggestion
world's
fuel resources which
also
poses a threat to the climate. Global
warming which
Accept comma addition
warming, which
is the main issue can
also
be checked by limiting the number of cars used by people and encouraging people to use public transport
instead
. Restricting
air
travel
will equally reduce tourism, intercultural exchange, etc. Countries like Ethopia who rely
soley
without any others being included or involved
solely
on
air
flight as a major source of income will definitely
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
if these
idea
Suggestion
ideas
of restriction
thrives
Suggestion
thrive
. In conclusion, It is irrefutable that
air
planes consumes fuel and causes
pollution but
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pollution, but
it would be unpractical to stop
air
travel
due to
this
reason.
This
will cost so many nations
alot
give out
allot
afloat
economically and will equally
inconvinence
an inconvenient discomfort
inconvenienced
inconvenient
inconvenience
individuals. Technology should be encouraged to produce
air
planes with less energy consuming engines.
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