Some people say there are more disadvantages of a car than advantages. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is generally believed that whatever has advantages
also
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has disadvantages. It is a debated issue whether the pros outweigh the cons. I am of the opinion that advantages of
car
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outstrip the disadvantages. Recently a
car
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is known to become an article of dress. Without which a person feels incomplete. Cars are used to show affluence and in return people earn respect from it.
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, imagine having a fleet of various models of exotic cars in your garage, people rate you as one of the wealthiest in the society.
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, some
tv
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TV
shows have programs where peoples garage
are shown
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is shown
with different cars in it. These people are highly regarded in the society.
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, cars with its primary function of conveying people within a place and even to distant places have helped in solving transportation problem. People move about with ease with
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great invention. It is
also
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one of the cheapest means of transportation and carries a limited number of passengers.
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However one
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However, one
of the major problems of
motor
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a motor car
the motor car
car
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is air
pollution which
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pollution, which
is known to be among the causes of global warming.
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problem has been put
on
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in
check by the production of modified engines that produces less combustion and the manufacture of electric cars that do not need any sort of fuel
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emission is totally avoided. In conclusion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
pen
down saying
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down, saying
that the pros of
car
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outweigh the cons.
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