some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls benefit from attending separate schools.

Bringing up children in a good manner is an important thing for our country and the society as well. Some parents nowadays opt to put their sons and daughters in mixed
schools
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schools, although
although
, others reject to do
this
. In my opinion, mixed schools are better because of many reasons. Both arguments are going to be discussed in the following lines. On one hand, some fathers and mothers choose to make their
enfants
a very young child (birth to 1 year) who has not yet begun to walk or talk
infants
join separate schools, because they want to limit the relationships among males and females for religious reasons or even for personal reasons.
For instance
, in some countries, there are schools that are established on gender
bases
a relation that provides the foundation for something
basis
and religious
criterias
a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated
criteria
. All these schools do not allow any relation between boys and girls and they teach them any materials that related to their sex separately. The Guardian has published a recent research proves that about 40% of schools in Middle Eastern
counteries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
are not mixed unlike schools in America.
Hence
, it depends on traditions and personal situations.
On the other hand
, other parents opt for schools that includes
mixture
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a mixture
in gender. In these schools, their children can deal with each other without any
embarrasment
the shame you feel when your inadequacy or guilt is made public
embarrassment
from
younger age
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a younger age
and
this
makes their relationship when they become adults normal enough and does not have any complications.
For example
, I was in a mixed school and
this
thing has made me not to be shy and it gave me self-confidence
also
.
Thus
, it is beneficial for young children. In conclusion,
this
choice differs from one person to another and in my point of view, it is more moral to give
enfants
a very young child (birth to 1 year) who has not yet begun to walk or talk
infants
the chance to deal with
eatch
(used of count nouns) every one considered individually
each
other without any kind of racist. It makes life easier for them.
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