Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

Nowadays, Poverty is the major issue in most of the countries. Some
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
are known to be developed one. So, the citizens of the former required support either from own nationality or else
from
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of
the
developed
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development
developer
developers
developments
. Let discuss, in detail each of the options. Regarding the choice, Support from The developed nations, They can provide support in providing food to the backward country in cheap or no price.
For example
, If they provide financial aid to NGO's
then
they can buy food for them.
Hence
the people over there can have
atleast
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at least
a meal per day. Another way is, Providing teachers with their own expenditure, so that it will helpful for them to get
job
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a job
jobs
the job
in their own or
foreigh
of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
area's. For a sample, educated can be
of
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in
high demand in any area and in any continent. Coming to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
option, Their own government should provide
subsidy
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subsidies
a subsidy
for their pupil, those who are economically backward, by giving them unpaid meals a day.
For example
, they should provide free token's to the unemployed ones, so that they fill their stomach. Not only that, but
also
should provide free training for
unemployed
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the unemployed
, so that they can get employment, Like computer coaching or mechanical courses. In conclusion, Not only the already develop nation should provide support for the under middle-class states, but
also
their own elected representatives should take care of.
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