International tourism is now more common than ever before.Some feel that this is a positive trend,while others do not.Discuss both views and state your opinion

Visiting tourist sites located in other countries
is becoming
Suggestion
were becoming
are becoming
increasingly popular unlike in the past. While certain individuals believe
this
is a welcoming trend, others do not. In my opinion, I agree that it is an important
development
as it would lead to the
development
of the tourist home country. On the one hand, It is often believed by some people that
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
to other countries for sight seeing is an acceptable phenomenon and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
agree, because the
development
of the host country of the visitor would be
actualised
make real or concrete; give reality or substance to
actualized
.
Accept space
.
To
further
explain, visiting recreational parks outside the shores of an individual's country would expose him or her to other valuable tools used in a nation's
development
.
As a result
, they learn about it and come back and practice what they
learnt
.
For example
, the Kenyan president, Keys
Agre
a city in northern India; former capital of the Mogul empire; site of the Taj Mahal
Agra
, stated in an interview that the establishment of the
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
parks and reserve,
kenya
a republic in eastern Africa; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1963; major archeological discoveries have been made in the Great Rift Valley in Kenya
Kenya
, was possible because he travelled to London for relaxation, and
learnt
how to develop a
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
park, after which he brought some of the animals sold at Wild game reserve home
.
Accept space
.
People pay money to see these creatures, and
consequently
,
Accept space
,
the revenue realised is used to build durable roads.
On the other hand
, there are few persons who opine that it is an unacceptable norm as it inculcates
bad habit
Suggestion
the bad habit
to the youngsters. By
this
I mean, different forms of social vices would be
learnt
by these young ones who leave for other regions of world for recreational purposes
.
Accept space
.
To illustrate, the daughter of the Russian president, Kim
kamaar
,
Accept space
,
stated in an interview that she was negatively influenced on one of her vacations to
kiman
a semiaquatic reptile of Central and South America that resembles an alligator but has a more heavily armored belly
caiman
cayman
come-on
Tourist Centre, Paris where she
learnt
how to club and engage in excessive alcoholic drinking. To conclude, while opinions may vary
,
Accept space
,
I believe that travelling to different continents for the purpose of sight viewing is a gratifying occasion as the visitor finds out various ways to grow his or her nation.
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