Some people think that watching sport is a waste of leisure time. Do you agree or disagree?

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There is a unique phenomenon in Bali recently, several
sport
bars have been opened.
This
is because some people enjoy watching sports while drinking beer.
However
, some of us argue that spending spare
time
watching
sport
is not wise. In
this
essay, I shall support
this
statement by giving some examples of more beneficial activities to be done in leisure
time
.
To begin
with, the notion that people watching
sport
in their spare
time
is not 100% true. It is because in some countries, namely Indonesia, there are hours of
time
differences.
For example
, most of times, audiences wake at midnight just to turn on their television and watch the match.
This
routine makes them restless and
also
disturbs other’s sleeping
time
, especially if the spectators watch the match in their living room.
Secondly
, I personally believe, unless the audience is a professional sports player who want to learn some techniques from the matches, it is wiser to spend
time
wisely doing some other activities. Namely, doing
instead
of watching sports, reading e-book, and
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
. There is a huge difference between watching and learning from
sport
matches. In my opinion, watching sports can be beneficial if it is done in an adequate amount of
time
and
then
it is continued by doing the
sport
itself. Doing direct physical activities can boost the stamina, improve the necessary skills, and strengthen the teamwork ability. In conclusion, I believe that watching
sport
matches
is
Suggestion
are
have been
are being
just a waste of
time
unless the audience is a professional athlete. There are so many above mentioned beneficial activities to be done in leisure
time
.
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