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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? High schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

#schools #students #study #courses #support
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The question of whether high school should allow students to
study
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 the courses that students want to
study
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 is the one
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 open for debate. Some people believe that a scholar from high school should have the right to
study
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 the courses they like.
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, other people disagree and stand that teenagers cannot totally be sure what they like and what they need to know at their age. In
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 essay, I will
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
 these points and present my view in
favor
promote over another
favour
 of people who believe that some courses must be required to consider by students. From the one side, having a chance to choose what one likes to
study
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 can bring many benefits.
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 of all, a student can be better prepared for the career he likes because he can spend more time studying what he is interested in.
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 of all, students will learn with more enthusiasm because they will learn what they like. From the other side, teenagers often can not completely understand what they want to do in the future. So, given a chance to choose, they can choose classes, which are easy to learn and do not take much time to
study
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.
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 of
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 after graduation, many students can be unprepared to
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
 in universities and, make careers. Personally, I think that some courses
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 as mathematics, literature, writing English must be required for studying with students.
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 will help them to gain more knowledge and experience, develop the ability to think logically, improve writing skills, etc. So, students will be better prepared for the real world and independence life. To sum up, I think that high school should have required courses because it is essential for a student to have a good base for future life. Required courses, as a rule, are more complicated, but they give the opportunity for students to extend their range of interests and help them to develop many important characteristics
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 as self-confidence, persistence, patience, etc.
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