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The world would be a better place if we all spoke the same language. Do you agree?

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As the world becomes more interconnected with the growth of the internet and cheaper travel, it is important to examine of a universal
language
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. There are benefits in terms of travel and business, but a common
language
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 threatens a
loss
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 of
culture
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 and identity.
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, a common
language
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 would mean there are no
language
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 barriers. Travelling to different countries would be easier and more convenient. In
business there
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business, there
 would be less danger of misunderstandings.
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, in situations of conflict where there are soldiers from different countries, it would be easier for them to work together if they all spoke one
language
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.
However
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,
this
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 would mean that the
loss
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 of all other languages as they become unnecessary.
Language
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 is tied to
culture
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. Through speaking a
language
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, one is showing cultural history and identity.
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, the way
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 changes
reflects
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reflect
 both the history of a society and the current
culture
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.
Loss
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 of a
language
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 means the
loss
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 of an important part of a
culture
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.
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, there is evidence that shows that
language
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 is linked to how people think. People who speak multiple languages alter their thought process when they change
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language
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the language
. The entire world speaking one
language
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 would mean people thinking in the same way, threatening future development and invention. In conclusion,
although
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 a universal
language
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 might make the world easier in terms of cooperation, it would not be a better place. It would mean the
loss
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 of
culture
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, identity and ways of thinking. In the long term, theses losses
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are
or
 greater than the benefits.

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