Some people think international car free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution,others think there are some other ways . Discuss both views and give your own opinion .

Pollution is a major drawback to keep
air
-quality good as per ratio in the past years whereas less
uses
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use
of cars.By the time
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the popularity of cars has risen in
use
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the use
which convert into
argued
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arguing
matter
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a matter
between two types of individuals.
some
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Some
people
believes
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believe
car free days a good solution to preserve the aura
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,
on
contrary I
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the contrary, I
the contrary I
believe with other ways are most effective and should
taken
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take
into consideration
.
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On the one hand, many people think that avoid cars for a day would reduce the
air
problems when
this
method follow up on
global scale
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a global scale
the global scale
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firstly
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Firstly
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,
the phenomenon
encourage
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encourages
the people to use public transport where
this
would beneficially shift up the revenue for
government
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the government
.
secondly
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Secondly
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people may adapt the lifestyle without using the cars so they will be less dependent on their vehicles but
also
they consider by walking or using
bicycle
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a bicycle
alleviate the traffic fumes.
On the other hand
, I believe that
this
is better to apply others ways to prevent atmospheric pollution while regimes expose an environment
tax which
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tax, which
car drivers and factories in all countries are forced to pay for the damage.
Therefore
, they would minimise the use of fuel and gases at their work place. Another effective propaganda to do campaigns can be run to provide
wealth
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a wealth
of information relate to
air
pollution.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
they attract
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
aware of
air
quality degradation and play a part in protecting the
air
. In conclusion
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single day brings some basic impacts on protecting the
environment but
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environment, but
it seems to me others solution is more effective for
air
quality which is more significant.
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