Some people think international car free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution,others think there are some other ways . Discuss both views and give your own opinion .

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Pollution is a major drawback to keep

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-quality good as per ratio in the past years whereas less

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use

of cars.By the time

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the popularity of cars has risen in

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car free days a good solution to preserve the aura

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believe with other ways are most effective and should

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On the one hand, many people think that avoid cars for a day would reduce the

air

problems when

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method follow up on

global scale

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a global scale

the global scale

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firstly

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the phenomenon

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the people to use public transport where

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the government

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people may adapt the lifestyle without using the cars so they will be less dependent on their vehicles but

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they consider by walking or using

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a bicycle

alleviate the traffic fumes.

On the other hand

, I believe that

this

is better to apply others ways to prevent atmospheric pollution while regimes expose an environment

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car drivers and factories in all countries are forced to pay for the damage.

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, they would minimise the use of fuel and gases at their work place. Another effective propaganda to do campaigns can be run to provide

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single day brings some basic impacts on protecting the

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it seems to me others solution is more effective for

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quality which is more significant.

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Some people think international car free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution,others think there are some other ways . Discuss both views and give your own opinion .

Fully explain your ideas

Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.

Many teachers follow the practice of giving students task for home often based on lessons taught in class . It is often believed that such a practice should be stopped as it reduces time spend on leisure activities or nonacademic pursuits. Do you agree or disagree?

Many claim that the fast food industry had a negative effect on evironment, eating habit and families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently.To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.