Some people think parents should control the behaviour of children from a very young age but others think we should give them more freedom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is a common belief amongst a few individuals that kids attitude can be best
molded
at a shaped to fit by or as if by altering the contours of a pliable mass (as by work or effort)
moulded
youthfull
suggestive of youth; vigorous and fresh
youthful
age
, while others are of an openion
that kids are better a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
of
with more liberty.I believe both control and freedom should be balanced together when it comes to from a particular thing or place or position
off
rasiseing
children.increasing in quantity or value
raising
resizing
n
the Suggestion
N
upcomming
essay of the relatively near future
upcoming
i
will shed more light on both views.
Children are like an empty refers to the speaker or writer
I
vasse
at a tender an open jar of glass or porcelain used as an ornament or to hold flowers
vase
age
.What ever we teach them they learn & believe without a second
thought.As they grow up they are no longer as close to us as they were before, hence
they learn more from outside
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outside, then
outside than
then
from home, which can be either be good or bad depending on the community and socity
we live in.It becomes quite an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
diffucelt
for parents to not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure
difficult
mold
them towards the right direction once they have been exposed to the outer world like high school & form in clay, wax, etc
mould
colledge
.elected vice president and succeeded as 30th President of the United States when Harding died in 1923 (1872-1933)
Coolidge
college
For
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example, I
example I
controled
and restrained or managed or kept within certain bounds
controlled
diciplaned
by my parents from an early obeying the rules
disciplined
age
.That has changed my behaviour and made me a gentlemen
.
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gentleman
On the other
hand when
kids are Accept comma addition
hand, when
givin
freedom at an early acknowledged as a supposition
given
giving
age they
can no longer control Accept comma addition
age, they
themselves nor
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themselves, nor
the
people in general
they
then
distingwish
between good and bad.mark as different
distinguish
distinguishes
distinguished
Such
kids fall prey of bad habbits
and an established custom
habits
distroy
do away with, cause the destruction or undoing of
destroy
thier
of them or themselves
their
childhod
. As they become the time of person's life when they are a child
childhood
childhoods
adults they
are limitless and have no respect for their elders nor do they possess feelings for anything.
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adults, they
for
example a much recent survey done by the US child services on the inmates of Suggestion
For
texas
county jail proved that they were either neglected by their parents as a child and they were given the freedom to do the second largest state; located in southwestern United States on the Gulf of Mexico
Texas
what ever
they desired when they were kids. Which one or some or every or all without specification
whatever
distroyed
them in their adulthood.
To spoiled or ruined or demolished
destroyed
conclude it
is always a good idea to control Accept comma addition
conclude, it
kids
attitude from Suggestion
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a
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an
age
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Otherwise, they
endup
as a Suggestion
end up
burdun
to the an onerous or difficult concern
burden
button
socity
by not fitting in.I am of the opinion that parents are the best teachers & preachers for their children when done right at an early an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
age
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