Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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In recent times, there have been increased awareness of environmental challenges in many countries. It is often argued that a significant measure to address problems in the environment is to raise the price of oil and gas use by automobiles. I support
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notion because it will help reduce both traffic congestion on the roads as well as air and noise pollution.
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, a rise in the price of
fuel
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often result
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often results
has often resulted
in a corresponding decline in traffic on the roads. High gasoline
price
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prices
makes it costlier to maintain
cars
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the cars
.
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, people would choose to use the public transportation system
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as trains, ferries and metropolitan buses than personal
vechicles
a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicles
. As a consequence, there will be less pressure on the roads, which will limit calls for road expansions that often destroy the ecosystem. If there were no rise in the cost of gasoline
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, there would have been increased agitations for new roads, due to traffic jams with its negative environmental impacts.
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, an important way to reduce noise and air pollution is to make
fuel
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more expensive
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Accept space
.
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will reduce exhaust and noise because of the reduced volume of cars. Rather than buying expensive
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, people will seek for sustainable means of transporting themselves.
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, means
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as electric cars and bicycles that produce little undesirable effects on the environment.
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, there will be a reduction in the deleterious consequences of climate change. In conclusion, when the cost of
fuel
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for automobiles is increased, there will be
reduction
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reduced
in road congestion and pollution, which will go a long way in solving environmental problems.
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will ensure a suitable
earth
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earthly
conditions
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condition
for the future generation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental sustainability
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • public transportation
  • carbon footprint
  • economic incentives
  • alternative energy vehicles
  • fuel-efficient
  • government subsidies
  • economic disparity
  • urban planning
  • rural infrastructure
  • sustainable development
  • carbon tax
  • green technology
  • demand elasticity
  • energy conservation
  • climate change mitigation
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