It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Nowadayes
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Nowadays
, there are more abilities for both scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural areas and
enviroment
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the environment
environment
. In my
opinion there
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opinion, there
are many advantages for the scientists and the science
filed
catch or pick up (balls) in baseball or cricket
field
in general.
For instance
,
travlling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
for
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from
in
north and south pole to discover and studying the features in these remote
ares
a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)
areas
will help in understanding changes in globe
such
as climate changes
such
as the increasing in degrees and trying to invent many ways to prevent these changes or at least
decleare
state emphatically and authoritatively
declare
declared
declares
it.
Furthermore
, observing animal
habitates
the type of environment in which an organism or group normally lives or occurs
habitats
habits
and
plants
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plant
features in these
era
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eras
can
helps
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help
in many fields
such
as pharma
industeries
the people or companies engaged in a particular kind of commercial enterprise
industries
.
On the other hand
, the disadvantages
for
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of
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
to
remote natural enviroment
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the remote natural environment
remote natural environment
will be dangerous for tourists
specifecaly
in distinction from others
specifically
if they
are not arrange
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are not arranging
are not arranged
don't arrange
do not arrange
it with a professional
tourists
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tourist
companies or not informing the authorities where they will hiding exactly in anticipation for any unplanned situations or disasters.
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