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You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

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Dear James, I am a resident of apartment A303
at
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 your community. I recently moved
in to
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 the city so it's really
wonderfull
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wonderful
 of you to assign me a fully furnished house. I am,
however
, facing issues with few furniture items which I would like to bring to your attention.
First
 of all, the bedroom houses only one Bunk Bed. Being a single guy, it's already
wastefull
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 to assing me that. To add to it, the bed is extremely noisy. Whenever I turn while sleeping it makes a rather horrific sound. I have already woken up scared
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 now. Another item that has been troubling me a lot is the dining table. It seems the height of the table's legs is not properly aligned due to which it keeps wobbling. For now, I am holding the table with one hand while eating with
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 to keep it stable. Can I please request you to send your in-house handyman to help fix these issues
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 Feel free to enter the apartment with your keys since I am out for work pretty much the whole day.
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