Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree/disagree?

Maintaing
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Maintain
Maintaining
Maintains
discipline
in children
by
Suggestion
with
corporal
punishment
is increasing with the passage of time.Some people believe that physical
punishment
is
the most finest
Suggestion
the finest
way to keep children in order.
This
essay will argue that smacking children for maintaining
discipline
is absolutely wrong. Smacking Children
by
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of
with
parents, has become one of a ritual in our society.Some children behave
mannerless
and
stubborn
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stubbornly
in front of guests,
as a
result parents
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result, parents
hit them to keep them in order.Children usually have a tendency that when they are
dealt
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dealing
with care
,
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,
they tend to become more
mischievious
naughtily or annoyingly playful
mischievous
,
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,
to a level that parents are compelled to use Physical
Punishment
.
For instance
,
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,
studies have shown that children coming out of Cadet schools
,
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,
Strick conservative convent schools and conservative well
disciplened
obeying the rules
disciplined
familes
a social unit living together
families
, are well-mannered and disciplined.
As a
result some
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result, some
parents
beleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that Smacking children physically is the best way to keep children
Discipline
However
,
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,
in a broader perspective
,
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,
the use of Physical
punishment
to keep children in check, has many negative
imapacts
the striking of one body against another
impacts
impact
on their mental health.I Believe that
this
concept is
compeletely
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
preposterous because it puts children under extreme mental stress due to which they can't flourish to their maximum abilities.
In addition
,
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,
it destroys the self-esteem
,
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,
confidence and creativity of
children which
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children, which
puts a significant
negatve
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
impact on their personality.One
study
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study, for
for
example in
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example, in
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
showed that
ninty
being ten more than eighty
ninety
percent of children are under severe mental stress due to corporal
punishment
in schools
,
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,
fear of being beaten by parents upon
commiting
perform an act, usually with a negative connotation
committing
minor mistakes.
Finally
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,
owing to above reasons
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
strongly believe that
this
is absolutely unacceptable way to maintain
discipline
in children. In conclusion
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this
essay argued that parents who believe in physical
punishment
for keeping children in order, have flawed understanding about children'
psycology
the science of mental life
psychology
.In my opinion
,
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i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
totally disagree with the idea of physical torture to maintain
discipline
in children
,
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,
rather children should be dealt with care, love and affection.They should be allowed to make mistakes, as we all learn from our mistakes.
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