Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree/disagree?
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is increasing with the passage of time.Some people believe that physical punishment
is the most finest
way to keep children in order.Suggestion
the finest
This
essay will argue that smacking children for maintaining discipline
is absolutely wrong.
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parents, has become one of a ritual in our society.Some children behave Suggestion
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result parents
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punishment
to keep children in check, has many negative imapacts
on their mental health.I Believe that the striking of one body against another
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this
concept is compeletely
preposterous because it puts children under extreme mental stress due to which they can't flourish to their maximum abilities.to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
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is absolutely unacceptable way to maintain discipline
in children.
In conclusion,
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this
essay argued that parents who believe in physical punishment
for keeping children in order, have flawed understanding about children' psycology
.In my opinionthe science of mental life
psychology
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i
totally disagree with the idea of physical torture to maintain refers to the speaker or writer
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discipline
in children,
rather children should be dealt with care, love and affection.They should be allowed to make mistakes, as we all learn from our mistakes.
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