Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, people often see most celebrities surrounded by photographers trying to shoot interesting news. It is often argued that the privacy of famous people should be respected by paparazzi, whilst others disagree and believe that as soon as a person decide to be a superstar, he
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choses
pick out, select, or choose from a number of alternatives
chooses
chose
to expose his personal life to the public. I personally believe that fame has
sacrifices but
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sacrificed, but
sacrificed but
to some extent.
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essay will discuss the above two points of views. It is undeniable that having personal space and privacy is one of the most known human right.
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, being followed constantly will definitely lead to a mental and physical
break down
the act of disrupting an established order so it fails to continue
breakdown
. It is
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important to have a private life away from the spotlight.
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, it is vital for each person to commit mistakes and being judged for every error will lead to psychological issues.
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, celebrities who are going through
divorce
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a divorce
already have anxiety from
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private situation, and when it is open to fans for judgement will make the superstar feels vulnerable.
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, exposing and giving up your privacy is a price of fame. To state it in different words, it is clear that the profit of celebrities is connected to the number of fans.
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, normal people often look up and search to know the updated news of the people they look up
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to
.
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, it is beneficial for both fans and celebrities
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have
paparazzi publishing the stories of famous people.
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, a recent
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statistic
showed that forty percent of singers spread
rumors
gossip (usually a mixture of truth and untruth) passed around by word of mouth
rumours
about themselves before a release of an album for the purpose of increasing sales. In conclusion, the exposure of celebrity lifestyle is a necessity for them to keep their place in the spotlight.
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, it should be respected when it is starting to affect their physical and mental health.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • invasion of privacy
  • personal space
  • media scrutiny
  • mental health
  • public figures
  • relentless pursuit
  • legal implications
  • ethical considerations
  • tabloid journalism
  • financial gain
  • public interest
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