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After leaving school or university, young people should choose a job or career that they love, rather than one that pays the best salary. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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For some people,
money
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 is the biggest factor that determines their choice of
career
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. They will pursue high-paying jobs even if they
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 enjoy it. Others,
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, follow their heart and choose a
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 they love.
Personally I
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Personally, I
 believe that
job
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 satisfaction is far more important than salary. Jobs are an important aspect of life. An average human being spends a great deal of his or her time in the workplace. If you love your
job
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, you
don’t
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 need another reason to get up early in the morning and leave for work. People who enjoy their
job
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 look forward to going to their workplace every morning.
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, if you enjoy your work, you are more likely to prosper in your
career
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. You may not earn a huge pay packet in the beginning, but your passion for your profession will ultimately take you places.
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, if you are in a
career
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 that you detest, you are unlikely to have the motivation to go to work.
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 lack of enthusiasm will ultimately limit your chances of professional growth. Worse still, if you
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 like your
job
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, it could stress you out and lead to many health problems.
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 doesn’t necessarily mean that
money
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 is not important. Of course, it is. You are unlikely to be happy if you do not earn enough to make a living.
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, there is no justification for doing something that you
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 enjoy just for the sake of making more
money
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. In conclusion, it is clear that choosing a
career
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 that one loves has many advantages over choosing one just for the sake of
money
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. If you love what you do, your chances of success are pretty high and
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the money
 will follow.
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