Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is true that several governments regard economic progress as the most critical achievement of a

country

.

However

, others believe that there are alternative aspects in the society that should be concerned. In my opinion, I support both claims as each has its own reasons.

To begin

with, it is undeniable that a

country

with a vigorous

economy

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economic

status would reflect the prosperity as well as bring better facilities for that nation.

Firstly

, when the

economy

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economic

development is put as top-priority, there would be more jobs for inhabitants with better salaries.

Thus

, it definitely might address the high rate of unemployment in many developing and undeveloped countries.

Moreover

,

strong finance ability

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the strong financial ability

strong financial ability

could help a

country

have a stable stand

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on

the

globe

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global

stage,

therefore

, influence more on politics and trading.

Secondly

, the authorities would have more funds to invest

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in

infrastructure and public services, which might improve the standard of living.

For example

, more schools and hospitals are built, thereby education and

healthcare

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health care

will be emphasized.

On the other hand

,

economy

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the economy

is not the only element contributing to the thriving of a

country

. Other aspects are human rights, equality or happiness, which have crucial impact on millions of residents. It is a moral treatment that governments help the minority groups,

for instance

subsidize poor children in terms of education and open vocational courses for people in rural areas that could not seek a job.

As a result

, residents would feel the warm attention

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of

the competent authorities towards them.

Furthermore

, a thriving

country

should focus on the environmental sustainability. As the

economy

grows fast

,

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,

more industrial complexes are constructed,

thus

release large amount of untreated garbage as well as hazardous gas into the surroundings. In the long term,

this

probably would adversely affect health and more epidemic diseases would appear. By way of conclusion

,

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,

it is crystal-clear that economic progress is extremely vital to a

country

, yet it is not the main field to focus on. From my point of view, it is better to develop all aspects in one time

.

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