Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is true that several governments regard economic progress as the most critical achievement of a

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, others believe that there are alternative aspects in the society that should be concerned. In my opinion, I support both claims as each has its own reasons.

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with, it is undeniable that a

country

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with a vigorous

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economy

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economic

status would reflect the prosperity as well as bring better facilities for that nation.

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, when the

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economy

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economic

development is put as top-priority, there would be more jobs for inhabitants with better salaries.

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, it definitely might address the high rate of unemployment in many developing and undeveloped countries.

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strong finance ability

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the strong financial ability

strong financial ability

could help a

country

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have a stable stand

in

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on

the

globe

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global

stage,

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, influence more on politics and trading.

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, the authorities would have more funds to invest

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in

infrastructure and public services, which might improve the standard of living.

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, more schools and hospitals are built, thereby education and

healthcare

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health care

will be emphasized.

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economy

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the economy

is not the only element contributing to the thriving of a

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. Other aspects are human rights, equality or happiness, which have crucial impact on millions of residents. It is a moral treatment that governments help the minority groups,

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subsidize poor children in terms of education and open vocational courses for people in rural areas that could not seek a job.

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, residents would feel the warm attention

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of

the competent authorities towards them.

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, a thriving

country

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should focus on the environmental sustainability. As the

economy

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grows fast

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more industrial complexes are constructed,

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release large amount of untreated garbage as well as hazardous gas into the surroundings. In the long term,

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probably would adversely affect health and more epidemic diseases would appear. By way of conclusion

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it is crystal-clear that economic progress is extremely vital to a

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, yet it is not the main field to focus on. From my point of view, it is better to develop all aspects in one time

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