‌2. As a result of electronic inventions such as computer and tv , people do less physical activity,and this is having a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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invention

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inventions

are created, that they

also

contain Computer and Tv.

Although

we know

Pc

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PC

and Television make our life easier and more varied, we should not unawareness of their threat

for

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to

health. So

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agree with

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issue, but

it depends on

every body

all people

everybody

who cares about their health which exercise everyday either do exercise and care about their

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pastoral

. On the one hand,

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the computer

computer

is one of

important and common device

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the important and common device

in everywhere humanity

are living

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is living

. More than people have a laptop at home and they are entertained by

use

it,

for

instance they

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instance, they

can see a movie, listen to a music, edit photos, play a game,

use

social

network

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networking

and have a live video with

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

people in all over the world and etc.

Actually nearly

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one

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a PC

PC

and they have

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a network

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makes

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work

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easier and faster. But it is a fact eyes can be damaged computer'S monitor and look at

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should

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the other hand

,

tepevision

broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects

television

is

also

a great entertainment with a lot of channels and programs, and even very it has very informative

programes

a series of steps to be carried out or goals to be accomplished

programs

programmes

programme

. We can be aware of news around the

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by it, children are fascinated with show animations. And as where as houses are smaller than the past and life method is changed so we

can not

can not

cannot

do more activity for entertainment at home and we

use

Tv for it, so it is necessary for

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being

healthy that we should go to the gym or a park and do exercise, till our lazy body which is created by sit down front of

Tv

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the Tv

TVs

being

refresh

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refreshed

. At the end,

in addition

to

this

which some

invention

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invention, such

such

as Laptop and television has some

hurts but

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hurts, but

if we compensation them

by

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with

correct replaces, it would be their benefits are very

usefull

being of use or service

useful

for us.