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Scientists predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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According to some scientists everyone will be speaking the same
language
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 in the future. If
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 prediction does come true, in my opinion, it will have both positive and negative ramifications. No doubt, a universal
language
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 will benefit both people and businesses in numerous ways. It will make communication easier.
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, businesses can market their products all over the
world
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. People can
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 travel to any part of the
world
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 without having to worry about getting lost because of the
language
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 barrier.
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, in turn, will benefit industries
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 as travel and hospitality. Needless to say, a universal
language
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 will benefit almost all economies around the
world
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. It may even foster respect and understanding among people of different ethnicities. On the flip side, the prospect of having just one
language
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 for all does not bode well for the preservation of cultural identities. Culture is intrinsically linked to
language
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. So if people adopt a global
language
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 and stop using their mother tongue it will not take long for their culture to die. The death of local languages will
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 make the folklore and literature in that
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 unavailable to future generations. Another possible consequence will be the loss of employment for people working as translators and interpreters. In a
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 where everyone speaks the same
language
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, they will be rendered jobless. In conclusion, a universal
language
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 can be beneficial for businesses and people because it facilitates hassle free communication.
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, it may lead to the demise of cultures and diversity.
Submitted by Rashini Dahanayake on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global language
  • linguistic diversity
  • cultural heritage
  • language extinction
  • international communication
  • educational barriers
  • global homogenization
  • cultural identity
  • translation tools
  • linguistic resources
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