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Band 6.5

You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: +introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like say what experience and skills you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir/Madam

#job #employment #agency #+introduce #sort #skills #sir #madam
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Dear
sir
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Sir
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 or
madam
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Madam
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, I am hopeful that your employment agency will assist me in finding a suitable full-time job. My name is Farman Nazarov. I am a
29 year old
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29-year-old
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 with
external
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an external
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 auditor background. I live in Oakville, Ontario. The jobs that I am willing to take are in
finance
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the finance
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 field and full-time. Even though, nowadays, more and more employers are asking for an in-person employment setting, I am looking for flexible options that would allow me to work remotely for at least a day a week. I have been exposed to different aspects of financial reporting and analysis as a part of my prior employment,
thus
, I am confident that my experience will be applicable
for
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 a finance role.
Furthermore
, my skills in Excel and Word would supplement my resume to meet any job requirement in
regards
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 to technical knowledge. I am looking forward to
hear
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 from you. Yours sincerely, Farman Nazarov
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single idea per paragraph
Consider breaking longer paragraphs into more distinct sections to emphasize individual points more clearly.
greeting and closing
The letter opens with a polite introduction and a clear purpose.
complete response
The letter effectively communicates all required information such as personal details, job preferences, and relevant skills.
suitable writing tone
Nice, friendly and formal tone appropriate for a professional letter.
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