All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that school teaches children a skill but others think having a range of subjects is better for the children's future. Discuss both sides.

The
school
is an embodiment of knowledge as well as a citadel of learning.
Thus
, students can either pick a skill from it or with its variety of subjects it can fortify
school
children in
preparation
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the preparation
of their various careers.
This
essay would elucidate both sides of the divide. On the one hand, the
school
teach
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teaches
a variety of subjects
such
as fine art which equip children with drawing and innovative skills. To put it another,
way children
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the way children
are exposed to the world of creativity early enough in
school
. Which can act as a source of survival hood in
future
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the future
. A good example of
this
can be proven when the popular Italian Artist Marco Parcileni was interviewed at the just concluded
2018 world art day which
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he told reporters that he was
first
introduced to art at
high
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a high school
school
in Italy.
Hence
, it is no doubt that the
school
can
also
better the life of a child by teaching skills.
On the other hand
, the
school
in
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
it's
curriculum has
variety
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a variety
of
subject
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subjects
such
as basic sciences as well as entrepreneurship.
This
can help buttress
school
pupils to make informed decision in deciding their careers based on the didactic knowledge they have been equipped with. For an instance, A
pivot
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pivotal
study done by the American
teaches
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teachers'
institute in 2017 supported the view that student who have done various subjects can easily identify their
strong
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strongest
ground, as
such
will be more successful in life.
Therefore
, children should be allowed to involve themselves in numerous subjects. To sum up, having
analyzed
examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts
analysed
both views I believe that
their
in or at that place
there
are advantages in both
side
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sides
.
However
, for children to successfully in future they must partake in different subjects.
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