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Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. What do you think is the reason for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

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In a recent survey conducted by times magazine states that shopping is the most famous pass time for youngsters. In my opinion, shopping is the
convienient
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
convenience
 and
intersting
arousing or holding the attention
interesting
 leisure activity
that is
 why more youngsters are attracted to it. If the shopping is
controled
restrained or managed or kept within certain bounds
controlled
 or
with in
internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
within
 the
budget
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budget, then
then
 it is a positive development. There are numerous reasons why
yougsters
a young person of either sex
youngsters
 prefer shopping
as
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at
 their favourite famous pass time.
Firstly
, buying things from retail shops or online is
intersting
arousing or holding the attention
interesting
 and trendy
.
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.
In other words
, by shopping latest fashion people feels good and happy.
Secondly
, shopping acts as a stress buster in today's busy
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
.
For instance
,
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,
frieds
a person you know well and regard with affection and trust
friends
 can plan
shopping
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to shop
 on weekends that eventually will increase their bonding and it acts as
stress buster
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a stress buster
stress busters
.
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.
 Shopping is always considered as a positive trend because it has many advantages
.
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.
 One of the primary
benefit
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benefits
 is that people can always be fashionable by purchasing recent fashions from the retail shops. Another point is people can save money by shopping when there is an offer going on especially from online shopping sites.
For example
, many retail shops and online portals are giving weekend offers and clearance sale which will help people to do
budjet
a sum of money allocated for a particular purpose
budget
 shopping.
However
, shopping should be
with in
internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
within
 the
budject
a sum of money allocated for a particular purpose
budget
.
Accept space
.
ie
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IE
I
i.e.
, it should be within our
budject
a sum of money allocated for a particular purpose
budget
.
Accept space
.
 In conclusion, shopping is considered as the most popular leisure activity across the world and it has many remarkable benefits.
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